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ElementJester >> #28978
Posted on 2013-06-18 04:41:54 Score: 1 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
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Feferi Peixes is a talented theater actress and one of Tick-Tock Town’s most famous celebrities. Working as a duo with her sister Meenah, the two have quickly become the most profitable and youngest actresses on the stage, playing as some of the most iconic stage characters in Tick-Tock Town. Feferi’s performances are known for playing her characters as endearing and sympathetic, even characters often played for their malice or vanity, and her ability to put sheer emotional force into her acting. While Meenah isn’t as famous for her talent and jumped into the theater circuit primarily to avoid following her mother’s profession, Feferi has given her critical tips on acting that have helped her become a serious actor in her own right.
Despite the lure of fame and fortune, Feferi has managed to keep it from getting to her head, and her friends know her as one of the kindest and most charitable people in the city. She takes the chance to meet with her fans whenever she can, and laments how her acting career takes time away from being with her friends. Having met and worked with a number of conceited actors, she’s picked up an ability to moderate selfish behavior, both her own and her friends’. However, Feferi is a bit of a daydreamer and her hectic schedule leaves her more than easily sidetracked, and at worst can get blindsided to her friends’ needs.
Out of all her friends, her most complicated relationship has to be with Eridan Ampora. The two met before Feferi became a smash hit, and tried dating for a short while until it became clear to both of them that her rising acting career and Eridan’s own insecurities at the time wouldn’t let her maintain a stable relationship with him. The two have since come to peaceful terms and remain good friends to this day. While he still hopes to rekindle that relationship someday, he’s content to make sure she stays safe and happy, and even serves as her personal bodyguard on busier nights, keeping more…questionable fans at bay.
She also enjoys long cool nights on the beach and the smell of fried seafood.
Feferi Peixes is a talented theater actress and one of Tick-Tock Town’s most famous celebrities. Working as a duo with her sister Meenah, the two have quickly become the most profitable and youngest actresses on the stage, playing as some of the most iconic stage characters in Tick-Tock Town. Feferi’s performances are known for playing her characters as endearing and sympathetic, even characters often played for their malice or vanity, and her ability to put sheer emotional force into her acting. While Meenah isn’t as famous for her talent and jumped into the theater circuit primarily to avoid following her mother’s profession, Feferi has given her critical tips on acting that have helped her become a serious actor in her own right.
Despite the lure of fame and fortune, Feferi has managed to keep it from getting to her head, and her friends know her as one of the kindest and most charitable people in the city. She takes the chance to meet with her fans whenever she can, and laments how her acting career takes time away from being with her friends. Having met and worked with a number of conceited actors, she’s picked up an ability to moderate selfish behavior, both her own and her friends’. However, Feferi is a bit of a daydreamer and her hectic schedule leaves her more than easily sidetracked, and at worst can get blindsided to her friends’ needs.
Out of all her friends, her most complicated relationship has to be with Eridan Ampora. The two met before Feferi became a smash hit, and tried dating for a short while until it became clear to both of them that her rising acting career and Eridan’s own insecurities at the time wouldn’t let her maintain a stable relationship with him. The two have since come to peaceful terms and remain good friends to this day. While he still hopes to rekindle that relationship someday, he’s content to make sure she stays safe and happy, and even serves as her personal bodyguard on busier nights, keeping more…questionable fans at bay.
She also enjoys long cool nights on the beach and the smell of fried seafood.
Snuffleheim >> #28999
Posted on 2013-06-18 07:46:20 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Needs a little work:
"one of the... most charitable people in the city"
and
"selfish behavior"
are mutually exclusive.
ElementJester >> #29005
Posted on 2013-06-18 07:54:40 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Duly noted. Most of the background work for TickTockStuck is still being set up and I'm fairly new to character writing in general, so I appreciate the feedback.
Bathtub_Shitter >> #29006
Posted on 2013-06-18 07:55:40 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
"an ability to moderate selfish behavior, both her own and her friends" which means she keeps it under control.
Snuffleheim >> #29016
Posted on 2013-06-18 09:24:01 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
^It does sort of take away the whole flaw side of it, though, which is part of the problem of having to pick...
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